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0:19欢迎来到CAMHS。
0:20This is, this is my office.这是我的办公室。
0:22So let's get started with the day.故从天起.
0:27Hello, if you're new to my videos, my name is Francis.你好,如果你是新到我的视频, 我叫弗朗西斯。
0:29I'm studying for a Masters in我在学硕士
0:31Developmental Psychology and Clinical Practice at UCL.在UCL的发育心理学和临床实践.
0:34And as part of this Masters, I'm doing a three-day作为主人公的一部分 我做了三天
0:36a week placement working in CAMHS, the Child and Adolescent Mental Health Service in the NHS.在卫生部、全国保健服务局儿童和青少年精神健康服务处工作一周。
0:41I'mи琌
0:41here at Springfield Hospital in South West London.这里是伦敦西南部的斯普林菲尔德医院
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1欢迎来到CAMHS。
2This is, this is my office.这是我的办公室。
3So let's get started with the day.故从天起.
4Hello, if you're new to my videos, my name is Francis.你好,如果你是新到我的视频, 我叫弗朗西斯。
5I'm studying for a Masters in我在学硕士
6Developmental Psychology and Clinical Practice at UCL.在UCL的发育心理学和临床实践.
7And as part of this Masters, I'm doing a three-day作为主人公的一部分 我做了三天
8a week placement working in CAMHS, the Child and Adolescent Mental Health Service in the NHS.在卫生部、全国保健服务局儿童和青少年精神健康服务处工作一周。
9I'mи琌
10here at Springfield Hospital in South West London.这里是伦敦西南部的斯普林菲尔德医院
11Today we're going to talk about the bread and今天我们要谈谈面包和
12butter of this service, which is assessment and triage.这个服务的黄油,这是评估和分解。
13Where's my mic?我的麦克风呢?
14Where's my hand?我的手呢? 我的手呢? 我的手呢? 手呢? 我的手呢? 我的手呢? 我的手呢? 我的手呢? 我的手呢?
15Basically the team I work in is a single point of access team, which is a tier two service,基本上我工作的团队 是一个进入点团队, 这是一个二级服务,
16meaning that we don't hold cases, there aren't inpatient units.也就是说我们没有病人 没有住院病房
17Every referral into CAMHS in每一个转介到CAMHS在
18Borough from GPs and schools comes here.来自GP和学校的Borough来到这里。
19They also come from A&E.它们也来自A&E.
20We decide what to do with them我们决定怎么对付他们
21via the process of triage and assessment.通过分门别类和评估过程。
22We refer on to a number of services, including a CPT clinic我们提到一些服务,包括欧洲防止酷刑委员会的一个诊所。
23counseling services run by the local authority, neurodevelopmental services, MASH, which stands由地方当局管理的咨询服务、神经发育服务,即MASH
24for the multi-agency safeguarding hub.多机构保护中心。
25Even though this is a lower tier of CAMHS, there can often be尽管这是低级的CAMHS,但经常会出现
26referrals that have immediate safeguarding risk, then they get passed on to MASH.转诊有立即保护风险,然后转诊给MASH。
27There's art therapy,有艺术疗法,
28there's drama therapy, there's an eating disorders unit, death CAMHS, a family therapy clinic.还有戏剧治疗 饮食障碍科 死亡CAMHS 家庭治疗诊所
29Basically there's a lot of different services that I cannot remember the name of all of them.基本上有很多不同的服务 我不记得他们的名字了
30Every morning in this team, there is a triage phone call by the clinical nurse specialists who这支队伍每天早上 都有一位临床护士专家的分诊电话
31go through all of the cases that have just come in and decide what to do with them.处理所有刚刚出现的案件 并决定如何处理
32If they're如果他们是
33deemed to require an assessment, they come in for a 90 minute talk with one of the clinical nurses需要评估,他们进来 与一位临床护士谈90分钟
34or clinical psychologist or myself.或是临床心理学家或我
35Basically I've got an assessment with a young person at 10,基本上,我有一个评估 一个年轻人在10,
36which I'm going to do and be observed by my supervisor.我将要做的 并被我的主管观察。
37Before then, I'm going to read all在那之前,我会读所有的
38the notes on the system that we have for the young person.我们给年轻人的系统记录
39We use this website called IAPTUS,我们用这个网站叫IAPTUS,
40which other services like to use Rio, I believe.其它哪些服务 喜欢使用里约,我相信。
41Each kid who's ever been into CAMHS in the borough每一个孩子 谁曾经进入了本市的CAMHS
42has a six digit number and you can just type in the number, pull up all their information,有六位数的号码,你可以打入号码,调取他们的所有信息,
43which is quite a lot of data to have at your fingertips.这是很多的数据 在你的手指端。
44I need to find out the number of the我要查一下这个号码
45in about two minutes.两分钟后
46I'm not sure how it's going to go, but we've just got to give it our best我不知道会怎么样 但我们得尽全力
47shot.射击。
48I've never worked with a child with a functional neurological disorder.我从未和有神经功能障碍的孩子合作过
49I've actually其实我
50just learned what that is.刚刚知道那是什么。
51It's a neurological disorder that has no physical cause.是一种没有生理原因的神经紊乱.
52So this kid所以这个孩子
53lost the ability to walk and had to relearn it, but there was no physical cause of the loss of失去行走能力,不得不重新学习,但没有任何物理原因
54ability to walk.能够行走。
55Obviously that can cause a lot of mental distress.显然这会引起很多精神痛苦。
56So we're going to talk about that所以我们要谈谈
57and then decide what to do after the assessment.然后再决定评估后该怎么办。
58So it went better than I thought it would, as in, yeah, I've never worked with a kid with所以比我想的要好 我从来没有和孩子一起工作过
59functional neurological disorder before, but then a lot of the assessments, even though they're so之前的神经功能障碍,但之后的很多评估, 尽管它们是如此
60different, actually follow a very similar kind of structure.不同的,实际上遵循一种非常相似的结构。
61It's all about the time leading up to这是所有的时间 导致
62kids started having difficulties with walking, the situation at home, the situation in school,孩子们开始有 走路困难, 家里的情况,学校的情况,
63the situations obviously had an impact on their mood.情况显然影响了他们的情绪。
64However, since the peak of these difficulties,然而,自从这些困难达到顶峰以来,
65it seems that they're actually doing a lot better and don't really require any additional support似乎他们确实做得更好 不需要额外的支持
66at the moment.现在
67We did propose the family consultancy service and individual interventions that are我们确实提议了家庭咨询服务和个别干预
68available, but they were managing well.有,但他们管理得很好。
69So we just said, if you need to come back in future,所以,我们只是说, 如果你需要回来以后,
70then the door is always open.然后门总是打开。
71And in terms of how I did personally, my supervisor said,至于我个人的表现 我的主管说
72good at building rapport.擅长建立关系。
73That was calm, calm guy.冷静,冷静的家伙。
74What can I say?我能说什么?
75I took a genuine interest.我真的很感兴趣
76And I think that's the best piece of advice I've gotten throughout this placement is just to fall我觉得这是我在这期间得到的最好建议 就是掉下去
77back in curiosity.在好奇心中回来。
78Whenever you feel stuck for something to say, I like to think, what would a每当你觉得卡住了 说些什么,我想,什么是
79psychologist ask or what would like a real clinician ask?心理学家问,或者想要真正的临床医生问什么?
80But in the end, what a real但最终,多么真实
81clinician would ask is what they are genuinely wondering.临床医生会问 他们真正想知道什么。
82In assessments, especially, it's not特别是在评估中,它不是
83about always imposing theoretical background into your questioning.总是把理论背景 强加给你的询问。
84It's just going through the它只是经过
85actions and exploring whatever comes up.行动与探索 任何出现。
86There were points where I could have let the conversation有一点我可以让谈话
87take a bit of a tangent, but I kind of brought it back to the structure, which I guess there isn't有点紧,但我把它带回了结构,我想没有
88always a right way to do that.总是正确的方式做到这一点。
89But I think when I do like rigidly stick to the structure, it comes但我想当我喜欢僵硬地坚持结构,它就来了
90from a place of like nervousness more than anything.从一个像紧张的地方 比任何事情。
91Now I need to write up the notes I got from this现在我需要写下我从这里得到的笔记
92assessment and pass them on to the clinician I was with.并把它们交给我和他在一起的临床医生
93But before then I have a panel meeting,但在此之前,我有一个小组会议,
94which I need to go to now because I'm late.因为我要迟到了,所以我得去
95Just picked up a meal from Tesco.我刚从特斯科那里拿了顿饭
96We've got Innocent Smoothie,我们有无辜的滑雪,
97Malt from the Blue, which has guava, lime, apple, coconut, coconut water and blue spirulina.产自蓝色的马特,它有木瓜,石灰,苹果,椰子,椰子水和蓝色螺旋藻.
98One of my favourite foods.我最喜欢的食物之一。
99螺ulin.
100Yeah, sounds like a pasta.是啊,听起来像意大利面。
101And then we've got然后我们得到了
102Southern Fried Chicken Wrap.南方煎鸡圈.
103Can't go wrong.不能错.
104What are the macros?宏观是什么?
10515 grams of protein in a pack,一包15克蛋白质
106so good for the gains.这样对收益是有好处的。
107When these are in stock, Thornton's Fudge Brownie.当这些在库存,桑顿的福吉布朗。
108Highly recommend,强烈建议,
109like top class content.像顶级内容。
110The world's a dark place, you know, working in psychology, we know how dark这个世界是一个黑暗的地方,你知道, 在心理学工作, 我们知道多黑暗
111the world is and they've actually increased the price of the Tesco meal deal in recent weeks to这世界是,他们实际上 提高了特斯科的食品价格 在最近几周到
112£3.50 without a club card.没有俱乐部卡的3.50英镑.
113So solidarity to everyone out there who has enjoyed their Tesco团结所有享受过特斯科的人
114meal deals up until now.到现在为止都是饭菜
115Right, so I've moved back to the spare office for the rest of the afternoon.好吧,所以我搬回备用办公室 剩下的下午。
116A lot of the team work remotely.很多团队都远程工作.
117It means there's quite a lot of space in the hot desking situation.表示在热桌上的情况中空间相当大.
118On a certain day, everyone will decide they want to work in the office and it will be really busy.在某一天,每个人都会决定 他们想在办公室工作, 它会真的很忙。
119So luckily today's a quieter day.所以幸运的是今天是安静的一天
120Firstly, I'm going to do some catching up of family consultancy.首先,我要做一些 赶上家庭咨询。
121Family consultancy is a one-off intervention offered in this service by family therapists家庭咨询是由家庭治疗师提供的一次性服务。
122and educational psychologists.以及教育心理学家。
123There are two clinicians in the room during a family家里有两个医生
124consultation.咨询。
125The first clinician is running the session, whereas the second one is chipping in第一位临床医生正在主持会话,而第二位临床医生则正在切入
126occasionally, but generally just taking notes.偶尔,但一般只是做笔记。
127And after the session, the second clinician writes第二位临床医生写道:
128up a therapeutic letter, which both summarizes what happened in the session, but also offers写了一封治疗信,既总结了会议中发生的情况,也提供了
129food for thought.以思考为食。
130It's meant to act somewhat as a replacement for additional in-person sessions.它的本意是作为额外的面对面会话的替代.
131That's my whistle-stop tour of family consultancy.那是我对家庭咨询的告密之旅
132So yeah, I had a session last week with this所以,是的,我有一个会议 上周与这个
133family and I'm going to try and write up one of the letters now.现在我要试着写封信
134I must interrupt this segment我要打断这段
135to bring you a very special interlude.给你带来一个非常特别的插曲。
136Basically in each of these episodes, I have interviewed基本上每集,我都采访过
137a member of the team.团队成员。
138I'm a great journalist, so you can have an idea what it's like in a我是一个伟大的记者, 所以你可以有一个想法是什么 在一个
139role here.这里的角色。
140First up today is one of the clinical psychologists here.今天是临床心理学家之一
141So let's go and interview him那我们去采访他吧
142and see what he has to say.看看他要说什么
143My name is Emmanuel Steele and I am a clinical psychologist.我叫埃马纽埃尔·斯蒂尔 我是个临床心理学家
144What's何谓
145a typical day like for you in Cannes?像在戛纳那样的典型日子?
146You could start at 80 o'clock or, you know, before that.你可以从80点开始,或者,你知道,在那之前。
147If we focus on, say, a nine to five, the first part of that day consists of screening all the如果我们专注于,比如说,一个9到5, 当天的第一部分包括筛选所有
148referrals that we have received, prioritizing those who are at high risk and require a risk将高风险和需要风险的人列为优先事项
149management course.管理课程。
150We would bring the families up, explain to them how to mitigate the risk.让他们知道如何减轻风险。
151Then we have to allocate cases.那我们必须分配案件
152Based on the information that we have, we may know what the根据我们掌握的信息,我们可能知道
153most appropriate next step is and it may not require an assessment to be offered in the first最适当的下一步是,它可能不需要在第一个阶段提出评估。
154place.地点。
155For example, a seven-year-old child who seems to have great difficulty in concentrating,例如,一个七岁的孩子 似乎很难集中精神,
156is very agitated, is disruptive in class, but there is no risk and there is no mental health情绪非常激动,在课堂上引起干扰,但是没有风险,也没有心理健康
157difficulty.困难
158It may make sense that if the request from the school, from the parents and the GPs,如果学校、家长和全科医生的要求
159specifically for ADHD assessment, that we go down that route.特别是为了ADHD评估 我们沿着这条路走
160Otherwise, we would phone the families,否则我们会给家人打电话
161try and establish contact, get some more background information, address any risk if it does come up.尝试建立联系,获取更多的背景资料,解决任何风险,如果它确实出现。
162When necessary, we would offer an assessment.必要时,我们将作出评估。
163So we frequently have meetings with social services,我们经常与社会服务部门会面
164whether it's safeguarding concerns, meetings with the school.这是否是为了保护人们的担忧 与学校会面
165We call them team around the child,我们称他们为团队 在孩子周围,
166meetings with the team around the family meetings.与小组举行家庭会议。
167Everybody comes to share what they think has每个人都来分享他们的想法
168improved.改进。
169So we focus on the concerns and then we agree on what the plan is thereafter.因此,我们把重点放在关注问题上,然后我们商定计划之后的内容。
170Every service每一个服务
171is aware of what is expected of them without interventions overlapping or there being too了解在不重复发言的情况下预期会发生什么,或者也存在
172many professionals or not sufficiently or certain areas of a young person's life not being addressed许多专业人员或不够或青年人生活的某些领域得不到解决
173sufficiently.足够了
174So what would you say to someone who is thinking of becoming a clinical psychologist你会对一个想成为临床心理学家的人说什么?
175and getting into the field, anything they should bear in mind?进入战场,他们应该想到什么?
176Okay, I'm flagging boys.好吧,我给男孩吹嘘。
177For the rest of today, I'm going to help out where I can with今天剩下的时间 我会尽力帮忙
178neurodevelopmental screening.神经发育筛查.
179Within the triage process, a number of the referrals, quite a lot在分门别类的过程中,很多转介,很多
180of them actually, are referrals for screening and diagnosis of a neurodevelopmental disorder.其中,是指转诊以进行神经发育障碍的筛查和诊断。
181So what那又怎样?
182me and Maisy do is summarize the documents that have been sent, thinking about ADHD and autism我和Maisy正在总结已经发送的文件, 思考ADHD和自闭症
183as a school report, as a developmental history, a bunch of questionnaires, any additional documents作为学校报告,作为一个发展历史, 一堆问卷,任何额外的文件
184because a lot of the children will have speech and language difficulties, occupational therapy,因为很多孩子会 语言和语言困难, 职业治疗,
185and on top of that mental health difficulties.除了那些心理健康困难之外
186Screening is about partially out those检查大约是部分
187different factors and what's going on in the rest of the family as well to decide whether it's worth不同的因素 以及家庭其他成员的遭遇 也是为了决定是否值得
188putting forward for assessment.提出供评估。
189But my role at the moment is just to summarize the documents.但我现在的作用只是总结一下文件。
190So that's what I'm going to do.故知此义.
191It's like CCTV footage.这就像闭路电视的镜头。
192All right, going to call it a day there boys.好了,今天就到此为止,孩子们
193I have had a reasonably productive day overall今天我总算够有收获的了
194after doing the assessment, dipping my toes in the other areas of my role, family consultancy,做了评估后,把我的脚趾 在我的其他角色领域,家庭咨询,
195and the neurodevelopmental screening stuff as well.还有神经发育检查
196Thank you to Southwest London and St. George's感谢西南伦敦和圣乔治
197Mental Health Trust for giving me the opportunity to film here.心理健康信托基金给我机会在这里拍摄。
198Thank you very much for watching非常感谢你的观看
199and stay tuned for the next episode of A Day in the Life at CAMHS.在CAMHS的"生命中的一天"的下一集 继续收听
200What makes a personal statement good enough to get into Cambridge?是什么使个人声明 足以进入剑桥?
201If you're new here, my name's Francis.如果你是新来的 我叫弗朗西斯
202I did psychological and behavioral sciences at我做了心理和行为科学
203Emmanuel College Cambridge.埃马纽埃尔学院剑桥分校.
204Today I'm interviewing one of my friends who went to Emmanuel with me今天我要采访一个朋友 他和我一起去了埃马纽埃尔
205about her personal statement.关于她的个人陈述。
206She did natural sciences and graduated with a first.她从事自然科学,并以第一名毕业.
207I think我觉得
208objectively she wrote an unreal personal statement.客观上她写了一份不真实的个人声明.
209I think it contains a lot of advice我觉得里面有很多建议
210that applies to any subject and not just natural sciences.这适用于任何学科,而不仅仅是自然科学。
211So without further ado,所以不用再多说了
212do you want to introduce yourself?你想自我介绍吗?
213Hey, I'm Poppy.嘿,我是罂粟。
214I went to Emmanuel College我上过伊曼纽尔学院
215where I studied natural sciences.在那里我学习自然科学。
216I specialize more in the physics side.我更擅长物理方面
217Physnatsky是人们喜欢称之为它。
218And who are you?你是谁?
219Sorry.对不起
220I'm Francis.我是弗兰西斯。
221We, wait, I'm a bit confused.我们 等等 我有点困惑
222We went to Emmanuel College together.我们一起上过埃马纽埃尔学院
223You did as well.你也一样。
224That's hilarious.这太好笑了
225I must have never met you.我一定是没见过你
226We've been friends for like five years now.我们五年来一直是朋友
227Not ringing any bells.没有敲钟。
228Sorry.对不起
229We went to some formals together.我们一起参加了一些形式。
230You might be getting mixed up.你可能会搞混的
231I don't know.师曰.
232I'm not sure just seeing someone around counts as friendship, Francis.我不确定只是看到周围有人算友谊 弗朗西斯
233Thanks for submitting your personal statement to me.谢谢你向我提交个人陈述
234I think it'd be good if we perhaps pulled最好还是拉一下
235it up and had a read through it together.一起读了一遍
236Sounds great.听起来不错
237Just to start with, I think it'd be good to do a bit of background.首先,我想做一些背景。
238So where did you apply?你在哪里申请的?
239You applied to obviously natural sciences at Cambridge.你在剑桥大学申请自然科学
240Did you apply to natural sciences你申请了自然科学
241all five unis or?全部五个unis还是?
242Yeah.
243So it's a bit of a mix of courses.所以这课程有点混杂.
244I actually applied to four unis, natural sciences at Cambridge.我在剑桥大学应用了四门自然科学
245I applied for natural sciences我申请了自然科学
246at Durham as well.在达勒姆也是
247And then I applied for physics at Manchester and St. Andrews.然后我在曼彻斯特和圣安德鲁斯申请了物理学.
248How many offers did you get?你得到了多少报价?
249Did you nail all four?你钉了所有四个?
250I think I did get all four offers.我想我得到了所有四个报价。
251Yes.
252Because you applied to physics at some unis and natural sciences at others, would you say因为你在大学和自然科学专业 学习物理,你会说
253that you wrote this personal statement just thinking about like natural sciences in general你写了这份个人声明, 只是想着像一般的自然科学
254or were you going into it like I'm basically doing a physics personal statement?还是你好像在做物理个人陈述?
255Yeah, I approached it really as a physics personal statement.是啊,我认为这是 物理个人声明。
256I mean, that was my main我的意思是,这是我的主要
257interest anyway.无论如何,利息。
258And that was kind of what most of the stuff that I'd done that I could我所做的大多数事情都是这样
259talk about was centered around.谈论是围绕周围。
260So to a certain extent, it was natural that that was the focus.所以在某种程度上,这是自然的焦点。
261But I think also obviously for the ones that you're just applying for physics at,但我也认为很明显 对于那些你刚刚申请物理,
262there's no point talking about your interest in chemistry specifically.你对化学的兴趣是没有意义的
263I mean, obviously if you want to, that's great.我的意思是,显然 如果你想,这是伟大的。
264But I didn't think that that was a key focus.但我不认为这是一个关键焦点。
265The thing that was very useful for Cambridge is that they let you submit a sort of supplementary对剑桥来说非常有用的是 他们让你提交某种补充
266这叫SAQ
267You can have an extra sort of couple of hundred words that you can talk about你可以多说几句话
268why the Cambridge course specifically is really good for you or why you're a great candidate for为什么剑桥课程特别适合你 或者为什么你是一个伟大的候选人
269the Cambridge course.剑桥课程。
270And so that was what I used to talk about my kind of broader interest in所以,这就是我曾经谈论 我那种更广泛的兴趣
271sciences and why I wanted to do natural sciences specifically rather than just doing physics.科学 和为什么我想专门做自然科学 而不是仅仅做物理。
272I remember the SAQ now.我现在记得SAQ了
273It's like your chance to simp for Cambridge.这就像你为剑桥做小事的机会
274I love your course.我喜欢你的课程
275I love your uni so much.我太爱你的尼了
276So what process did you follow那么,你遵循什么过程
277like writing the personal statement?比如写个人声明?
278Do you remember when you started writing it or你还记得你开始写作的时候吗?
279how many drafts you took to get to this pristine finished product?你花了多少草稿才能拿到这个原始的成品?
280I first started writing a personal statement draft sort of at the start of the summer of year 12.我开始写个人声明草案 有点像12年夏天开始的时候
281Around that kind of timeline, I did a first draft.在那种时间里,我做了初稿。
282I think it was quite useful to do it我认为这样做很有用
283that summer because it helped to identify kind of gaps in what I had to talk about.那年夏天,因为它帮助 找出了一些差距 我不得不谈论。
284The process that I started with really was just writing down a list, everything I'd ever done,我开始的过程 真正只是写下一个列表, 我做过的一切,
285everything I'd ever read that could be relevant, every talk that I'd seen or video that I'd watched我读过的一切 可能是相关的, 我见过的每一个谈话 或视频,我看了
286or just everything that I could possibly include that might be relevant.或者我可能包括的 可能相关的一切
287And then kind of sitting然后坐着
288down with that piece of paper of just a list of random things and thinking about what were the写着一张纸 上面只是一些随机的事物
289key to me.钥匙给我
290Anything you put on a personal statement could be asked in an interview.任何你写的个人声明都可以在采访中询问.
291So you want to have things to talk about that you're excited to talk about too.所以,你想有事情 谈论,你兴奋 谈论。
292You don't want to maybe oversell yourself and write down about the stuff you're not interested你不想过度出卖自己 写下你没兴趣的东西
293in.进去
294Like really just take boxes and then in an interview they ask you about it and it's curtains.就像只是拿箱子,然后在一次采访 他们问你关于它,这是窗帘。
295Yeah, exactly.没错
296You cobbled the draft together with this list of things.你把草案和这份清单拼在一起
297How much did your first你第一次赚了多少钱?
298draft resemble your final draft?草稿和你最后草稿相似吗?
299I think it probably changed quite a lot.我认为它可能改变了很多。
300I think the kind of overall structure stayed the same.我认为总体结构保持不变。
301The narrative through the说明通过
302through the personal statement, I guess.我想,通过个人陈述。
303The plot line, yeah.阴谋线,是的。
304The plot line, exactly.确切的说,是阴谋线
305I think the main difference was just slimming stuff down,我认为主要的区别只是 瘦的东西下来,
306making the language as concise as possible so that I could fit in as much content as I could.尽可能使语言简洁,以便我能够适应尽可能多的内容。
307And I used the SAQ to add in a couple of extra, like a book that I'd read that was more on the我用SAQ加了几个额外的, 就像一本我读过的书,它更贴在
308broader science side rather than physics.更广泛的科学方面,而不是物理方面。
309So do we want to read this out together?我们要不要一起读?
310Do you want to?你想吗?
311Inchronized.仁义化.
312I am fascinated by the workings of the universe from simple mechanical interactions to great我对宇宙从简单的机械相互作用到伟大的工作很着迷
313astronomical phenomena.天文现象.
314The evolving nature of science draws me to it as there will always科学不断演变的本性吸引着我 永远
315be new ways to apply knowledge, discoveries to be made and theories to be formed.成为应用知识、发现和形成理论的新途径。
316Everything I我的一切,我爱
317learn contributes to my growing understanding of how the world works.学习有助于我日益了解世界是如何运作的。
318The pursuit of a complete追求一个完整的
319understanding drives my desire to study physics.理解促使我渴望研究物理学
320How do you feel having your personal statement你的个人陈述感觉如何?
321read back to you?读回来给你听?
322It's okay.没关系。
323That's good.这是很好的。
324I think I cringe at mine.我觉得我挺喜欢的
325I think it's easy to have a very我觉得有一个非常
326first sentence in particular.特别是第一句。
327I think mine was quite inoffensive, I would say.我认为我的很无礼
328I think what I was trying to do with the first paragraph was just genuinely express why I wanted我想,我本来想用第一段 来表达我为什么想要
329to study physics.研究物理学
330My arm denies between doing physics and engineering because I was quite我的手臂否认 在物理和工程之间 因为我相当
331interested in both originally.对两者都感兴趣
332And these were the actual reasons why I like settled on physics.这些是我喜欢在物理学上定居的真正原因。
333I guess I was just trying to be true to myself.我想我只是想对自己说实话
334Is there anything from this intro do you think你觉得这里面有什么
335that people applying to any subjects could apply?申请任何科目的人可以申请?
336I think getting across your motivation,我想通过你的动机,
337something that you want to be very clear from the get go, you want to try and have a catchy你想清楚的离开,你想尝试 并有一个快感
338or sort of vaguely attention grabbing first sentence without it being too extreme, I would say.或那种模糊的注意 抓住第一句 没有它太极端,我想说。
339Ever since I was a child, I've wanted to be a natural scientist.从小就想成为自然科学家.
340I think if you can avoid the cliches, then that is good too.如果你能避免那些陈词滥调 那也不错
341Yeah.
342And how far are you along in your pursuit of a complete understanding?你在追求一个完整的理解方面进展了多少?
343Do you have complete understanding now?你现在明白了吗?
344Unlike the brain memes, I'm like midway.不像脑电图,我就像中途。
345I see.原来如此
346I'm like exploding brain, but not yet elevated.我就像脑爆炸,但还没有提升。
347Not where he's like in the air like meditating with like the universe spinning around him.而不是他像在空气中一样 沉思着像宇宙围绕他旋转
348So paragraph two, I enjoy keeping up to date with scientific developments and regularly read因此,第二段,我喜欢跟上科学发展,并经常阅读
349Physics World, a New Scientist.物理世界 新科学家.
350I found the detection of gravitational waves especially我特别发现了引力波的探测
351exciting in its validation of Einstein's theories.爱因斯坦理论的验证令人兴奋
352Inspired by this, I attended a lecture受此启发,我参加了一个讲座
353day on topics including relativity, black holes and dark matter, where Dr. Steven Fairhurst,包括相对论,黑洞和暗物质 博士史蒂文·费尔赫斯特,
354a LIGO data analyst spoke.a LIGO数据分析师发言。
355I found it intriguing when he compared the elastic modulate of diamond他比较了钻石的弹性调制,我觉得很有趣
3561200 gigapascals to that of space time, 10 to the power of 24 gigapascals to explain why1200千兆卡至空间时间 10千兆卡至24千兆卡以解释原因
357gravitational waves are so weak.重力波涛微弱.
358I previously considered space time to be less tangible.我之前认为空间时间不太明显
359So it was remarkable to see that it is quantifiable and can be likened to normal materials.因此,非常令人瞩目的是,它可以量化,可以比作普通材料。
360Let's just sit with that for a few seconds.我们坐一会儿
361Keeping up to date with scientific developments跟上科学发展
362firstly.先说.
363I mean, I think that sentence what I really wanted to talk about was the talks that我的意思是,我认为这句话 我真正想谈的是... ...
364I've been to being able to talk about New Scientist and Physics World was kind of a useful extra thing我一直能够谈论新科学家 和物理学世界 是一种有用的额外的东西
365that I could throw in as an introduction to the other part.我可以做另一部分的介绍
366I think it's a nice the way you've我觉得这样很好
367kind of segued into your attending lecture days because you're like, oh, I was just humbly reading那种迷惑到你参加讲座的日子 因为你喜欢,哦,我只是谦虚的阅读
368some magazines and then I thought I will explore this interest further and take myself along to a一些杂志,然后我想 我会进一步探索这种兴趣 并带我自己去一个
369lecture day.演讲日。
370I guess you've pulled out some you found interesting from it as well and not just我想你已经拿出一些 你发现有趣的从它,而不是仅仅
371I read this, like, take me at my word for it.我读到这个,喜欢, 听我的话。
372You've included receipts.你已经包括收据。
373I've read every copy我看过每本
374since 2010.自2010年以来。
375Please test me.请试我.
376This lecture day, when did you go to that?你什么时候去的?
377Sometime in 2016.2016年某时.
378I一、导 言
379can't remember exactly when it was.不记得是什么时候了
380So was it the summer after year 12?是12年后的夏天吗?
381Probably around that summer.大概那个夏天吧
382Yeah, it was brilliant.是啊,这是辉煌的。
383It was actually genuinely really, really interesting.这其实是真的,真的很有趣。
384So that was a fun所以,这是一个乐趣
385thing to be able to talk about.能够谈论的事情。
386And yeah, I knew that if they asked me about an interview, I'd be是的,我知道,如果他们问我 关于采访,我会
387able to talk about it passionately.能充满激情地谈论它。
388Did you get asked about any of this in interview?你在接受采访时被问到吗?
389No, they不,他们
390didn't ask me a single question about my personal statement.没有问我一个关于我个人陈述的问题。
391I think some people get asked about我想有人会问起
392their personal statements, so it's definitely not a right whatever you want kind of situation.所以这绝对不是你想要的权利
393You你们
394have to assume that you will be asked.不得不假设你会被问到
395When you're writing your first statement, you have to assume当你写你的第一个陈述, 你必须假设
396that you will be asked about every single thing that you put.你将受审问,关于你所表现的一切。
397Definitely.当然
398What is LIGO as a什么是LIGO作为一个
399non-natural scientist?非自然科学家?
400I actually can't remember what it stands for right now.其实我不记得它代表什么了
401It's just really痷
402awkward.尴尬。
403Is it the, let's think, the Laser Interferometer Gravitational Wave Observatory?是激光干涉仪引力波观测站吗?
404Don't play with me, Franz.别耍我,弗朗茨
405LIGO is basically the experiment that first detected gravitationalLIGO基本上是第一次检测到引力的实验
406waves.波涛.
407Oh, that's kind of sick.哦,这有点恶心。
408It is actually quite sick.实在是太恶心了
409You previously considered space time你以前考虑过空间时间
410to be less tangible.变得不那么明显
411I feel like with that horrendous take, like who would think that about我觉得这招太可怕了 就像谁会想到
412space time?空间时间?
413But saying that I've previously considered this idea and now I think this,但是说以前我考虑过这个主意 现在我想
414it shows that you are open to new ideas.它表明你对新想法持开放态度。
415I don't think they're looking for someone who knows我觉得他们不是在寻找知道的人
416everything.一切众生.
417It's actually not a weakness to say I previously held this idea and now I think this,其实这不是一个弱点 说我以前持有这个想法 现在我想,
418like after doing my own learning.就像做我自己的学习。
419One other thing that I was advised, I remember getting feedback on还有一件事我被建议, 我记得有反馈
420from people who looked at my personal statement, was to name drop.从那些看我个人陈述的人那里 说出"落"
421So if there's anyone that you所以,如果有谁是你
422met, listened to a talk from, read a book of, whatever it is, if there's someone in the science相遇,听了一段话,读了一本书,不管它是什么,如果有科学的人
423community or academic community and whatever subject you're applying for that you can say社区或学术界 和任何你申请的主题 你可以说
424specifically, then it's worth dropping that name in there.具体地说,那就值得把这个名字掉进去。
425Anything else you want to say about你还有什么想说的
426that paragraph?那个段落?
427I guess one other thing is that the talk that I went to touched on a lot of我想还有一件事是,我去谈 很多
428complicated science, which I didn't at all understand.复杂的科学,我完全不明白。
429I mean, I don't think I even covered我的意思是,我不认为 我甚至覆盖
430certain of those concepts in my master's degree at Cambridge.我剑桥大学硕士学位中的某些概念
431What I tried to highlight is that I我试图强调的是,我
432could take something from it, that maybe I could link more to the science that I had studied and可能从中吸取一些东西, 也许我可以更多的联系 科学,我已经研究
433was still interested to learn.仍然有兴趣学习。
434Yeah.
435I think when I was writing mine, on one hand I was wondering,我想当我写我的, 一方面,我在想,
436should I be trying to impress the admissions people by flexing some knowledge of a niche concept in我是否应该努力给录取人员留下深刻的印象, 让他们了解一些特殊的概念
437my subject?我的话题?
438But it's like using flamboyant words, isn't it?但它就像用闪闪发光的词,不是吗?
439You can kind of see through that really.你能看透这些
440You're applying because you don't know everything about natural sciences, not because you already你申请是因为你不懂自然科学 不是因为你已经
441do.说吧
442Exactly.没错
443You're there to learn.你在那里学习。
444A willingness to learn is a big part of what they're looking学习的意愿是他们期待的
445for.为.
446All right.好吧,我们走。
447Next paragraph.次第一段.
448So this paragraph is like exploring your concrete interest in因此,这一段就像探索 你的具体兴趣
449science, like entering competitions and touching grass, leaving your house to like actually do科学,比如进入比赛 摸草,离开你的房子 喜欢实际做
450things.东西。
451Through entering an essay on invisibility cloaks for the Newnham essay prize, I explored通过进入一篇关于隐形外衣的文章 为纽汉姆散文奖,我探索
452physics applications.物理应用.
453It was striking how interdisciplinary the sciences are on a practical令人惊讶的是,跨学科科学在实践上
454level.级别。
455The most promising prototypes use meta materials, allowing scientists to manufacture最有前途的原型机使用元材料,使科学家能够制造
456material properties unseen in nature, such as negative refractive indices.物质属性,如负折射指数。
457I am fascinated by我对
458possibilities presented by such fast developing fields, where the main limitation is our ability快速发展领域提供的可能性,其中主要局限在于我们的能力
459to manufacture on a nano scale.在纳米规模上制造。
460Talk to me about invisibility cloaks.跟我说说隐身衣
461When can I get my hands on我什么时候可以把手拿开
462one?一个?
463I'm not going to pretend I remember all of the science.我不会假装我记得所有科学
464I'm not going to lie.我不会撒谎的
465Is Newnham是纽汉姆
466essay prize like Newnham College, Cambridge?剑桥纽汉姆学院的散文奖?
467Yeah, it was Newnham College, Cambridge.是的,这是纽汉姆学院,剑桥。
468I think for我觉得
469quite a few subjects, different Cambridge or Oxford colleges will have essay competitions,剑桥大学或牛津大学 都会举办散文比赛
470and they're quite an easy way.而且他们很轻松
471Not easy, like it takes a lot of time to put the essay together,不容易,像它需要很多时间来整理论文,
472but it's sort of like to add on your personal statement.但它有点像 在你的个人陈述。
473I know you did the EQ, I didn't have我知道你做了EQ,我没有
474that, so I wanted to have... You watched my video.所以我想拥有... 你看了我的视频。
475I also watched your video.我也看过你的录像
476But yeah, I wanted to但是,对,我想
477have some other things that I could talk about, which is why I entered in that.还有其他事我可以谈 所以我才加入
478They had a few他们有几个
479different titles that you could choose from, and so I chose to write one about invisibility cloaks不同的标题,你可以选择, 所以我选择写一个 关于隐形外衣
480and whether they were scientifically possible.以及它们是否在科学上可行。
481It's a nice like subtle flex, I think, just to drop这就像一个微妙的弹性, 我想,只是放下
482a Cambridge college in.剑桥大学
483I didn't even think about entering essay competitions.我甚至没想过参加散文比赛
484I always saw that on我总是这样
485the walls in school when I was like, that's not for me, that's for the people who can actually学校的墙,当我喜欢, 这不是为我, 这是为人们 谁可以
486write words.写字。
487But yeah, anyone can enter, can't they?但是,谁都可以进入,不是吗?
488So it's good to put that in.所以,这是很好的放进去。
489I mean,我是说...
490I didn't win anything.我什么都没赢
491I don't think my essay was brilliant, but it was something that I could say我觉得我的散文很不聪明 但我可以说
492that I'd done, and I did enjoy doing it and found it interesting.我做了,我确实喜欢做,觉得很有趣。
493What did you mean by你说什么
494interdisciplinariness of sciences at a practical level?科学在实践层面的学科间关系?
495I guess that was maybe a bit of a natural我想这也许有点自然
496sciences plug, sort of showing that I had some broader interests beyond just physics specifically.科学插座, 显示我有一些更广泛的兴趣 不只是物理学。
497In this instance, a lot of the work is about like engineering and our ability to engineer the在这个例子中,很多工作是 有关工程和我们的能力
498specific materials and like nanostructures that we're trying to create.具体的材料和像纳米结构 我们试图创造。
499So that brings in a lot这带来很多
500of engineering and then also material science and other things.还有材料科学和其他东西
501But I think that's the case in但我认为情况是这样的
502so much of research, particularly where it's got any kind of practical element.有很多研究, 特别是当它有任何实用元素的地方。
503There's all这么多
504sorts of different sciences that can feed in.一种不同的科学,可以进食。
505So yeah, always good to include in a natural所以,是的,总是很好的 包含在自然
506sciences application.科学应用。
507My love of independent research was boosted during a week's work我对独立研究的热爱在一周的工作期间得到了加强
508experience in the theory of condensed matter group, the Cavendish Laboratory Cambridge.在凝聚物组理论方面的经验 卡文迪什实验室剑桥.
509I assessed the weather forecasting abilities of 19th century storm glass through detailed我仔细评估了19世纪风暴玻璃的天气预报能力
510statistical analysis of a year's data.一年数据统计分析.
511It was particularly interesting to study a historic device研究一个历史装置特别有趣
512rather than a futuristic one.而不是一个未来的。
513I found the analytical process of investigation rewarding我发现调查的分析性过程
514and later continued with further data analysis and research, which I entered into a school essay之后继续进一步的数据分析和研究,我写了一篇学校论文
515competition.竞争。
516This improved my skills in research analysis and communication of complex ideas.这提高了我研究分析和交流复杂想法的技能。
517Why is the word brilliant come through in the text?为什么文字里有辉煌这个词?
518Did I send you like a version of comments我是不是像评论一样寄给你的
519or something?还是什么?
520Oh, well, actually the sponsor of today's video is Brilliant.哦,其实今天的视频的赞助商很出色。
521Brilliant is a website精彩的是一个网站
522offering a number of online courses in maths, science and computer science.提供数学、科学和计算机科学方面的一些在线课程。
523From trying it从尝试中
524myself, I love how interactive Brilliant is.我本人,我喜欢互动的辉煌。
525It constantly keeps me focused through hands-on它使我不断的专注 通过实际操作
526activities like literally testing code within a lesson, which also helps me to remember what比如在课内测试代码 也帮助我记住
527I've learned.我已经学会了。
528There are so many courses to choose from that can help anyone level up their STEM有很多课程可以选择 它可以帮助任何人提升他们的STEM
529knowledge, whether you're looking for a foundational understanding of algorithms or calculus,知识,无论你在寻找对算法或微积分的基本理解,
530or equally, if you want to dip your toes into more advanced content like neural networks,或者,同样,如果你想把脚趾插入更高级的内容,如神经网络,
531doing just a little bit of learning every day can have a massive impact.每天只做一点学习 就能产生巨大的影响。
532To get started for free,为了免费开始
533org slash Francis Madden, 或者点击描述中的链接, 你将得到20%
534off an annual premium membership.取消每年的保费会员资格。
535Thank you very much, Poppy.非常感谢,鲍比。
536So these two examples that I was所以这两个例子,我是
537talking about, I guess one was a more kind of futuristic technology that we're still working说起来,我猜一个是 一种更未来的技术,我们仍在工作
538out ways to do it, whereas the storm glass is something that was used on like Charles Darwin's暴风玻璃就像查尔斯·达尔文的一样
539his explorations and the Beagle.他的探索和比格尔。
540I guess the sentence where I say it was interesting to study我猜我所说的句子是很有趣的
541a historic device rather than a futuristic one was trying to bring out that kind of comparison,一个历史性的装置,而不是一个未来式的 试图提出这种比较,
542because obviously you attend all of a science degree or all of any degree, looking at the因为很明显,你参加了所有 科学学位或任何学位,
543edge stuff.边缘的东西。
544A lot of it is understanding like the basics too.其中许多也是基本理解。
545And how did you get your hands on this你怎么拿到这个的
546work experience at the theory of condensed matter group?浓缩物质组理论的工作经验?
547Because I guess that's again,因为我猜这是再次,
548a bit of Cambridge experience in the Cavendish laboratory is quite a big deal, right?卡文迪什实验室的剑桥经验 相当重要,对吧?
549Yeah,
550I mean, the Cavendish laboratory is the research department for physics at Cambridge.卡文迪什实验室是剑桥大学物理系
551It's where这是哪里
552no better experience to get really.没有更好的经验 得到真正的。
553Yeah, exactly.没错
554It was definitely the most relevant and这绝对是最有意义的
555useful to have on there.有用吗?
556I think the experience that I had, I literally just found something on我认为我的经验, 我字面上发现的东西
557the Cavendish website and applied with an online form.卡文迪什网站,并以在线表格申请。
558And we were kind of supported by PhD students我们得到了博士生的支持
559to do a research project, which we then presented at the end of the week to the research group.做一个研究项目,我们然后在周末向研究小组提出。
560Yeah, so very accessible, actually very accessible work experience to someone applying like,是啊,所以非常容易获得,实际上非常容易获得 工作经验的人申请喜欢,
561yeah, just for that form, rather than having to know someone is actually not completely是啊,只是这个形式, 而不是必须知道某人实际上不是完全
562impossible to get experience at Cambridge in your subjects before the course.无法在剑桥获得经验 在课程之前你的科目。
563I did that myself我亲手做的
564因为我申请了Susten Trust
565他们没有让我去Susten Trust
566They let me他们让我
567onto this like experience, PBS, psychological and behavioral sciences at Cambridge, which was just剑桥的心理和行为科学
568like two days, one in July, one in August before year 13, just to like dip my toes in the subject.比如两天,七月一日,八月十三岁前 都想把我的脚趾放到这个话题上
569So I think for a lot of subjects, there are opportunities.因此,我认为,对于很多课题来说,机会是存在的。
570If you just put a bit of time如果你放点时间
571into doing research, you can actually find something and you've managed to drop Cambridge进入研究,你可以找到一些东西 并且你已经成功 离开剑桥
572essentially twice in one paragraph here.基本上在一个段落中两次。
573I mean, I think experience like this that you can get,我的意思是,我认为这样的经验 你可以得到,
574it doesn't need to be at Cambridge.它不需要在剑桥。
575It's still really useful to have.拥有它还是很有用的。
576It shows that you understand它显示你明白
577what an actual research environment looks like.真正的研究环境是什么样子的。
578You've actually been in a lab, you've met PhD你去过实验室,你见过博士
579students, which is maybe where you would potentially be in a few years time.学生们, 这可能是你可能 几年后。
580So I think all of that is所以我认为这一切
581good to be able to talk about regardless of what university it's affiliated with.不管它所属的大学是什么 都能说得出来
582Yeah.
583And now it现在
584has been a few years time.已经好几年了
585Where are you?你们在哪?
586I declined to answer.我拒绝回答。
587The thing about doing work关于工作的事
588experience like that is you know that the work you did is a hundred percent relevant to the course这样的体验是 你知道你所做的工作 100%与课程有关
589you'll be studying.你会学习。
590Acquainting yourself with a university research process, like on the ground熟悉自己的大学研究过程 就像实地
591in the lab.在实验室。
592And more independently and sort of more large scale than anything that you do at school更独立 排序 更大的尺度 比任何事情 你在学校做
593most of the time.大多数时候。
594Like if you do an experiment at school, you do it in one, like an hour lesson,就像你在学校做实验一样 在一个小时的课里做
595and then maybe you do like a half hour homework on it afterwards, doing something where you're然后,也许你喜欢一个半小时的作业 之后,做一些你在哪里
596spending a whole week going through data, working out what to do with it, presenting it, writing it花了整整一周的时间去读数据, 研究如何处理,展示,写出来
597up.起来
598All of that is quite good.这一切都很好。
599Anything else for that paragraph?还有别的吗?
600I guess just like highlighting the我想就像强调
601stuff that you contributed, the tangible skills that you developed.你贡献的东西, 你开发的有形技能。
602Yeah.
603It's not like just saying这不像只是说
604I am interested.我很感兴趣。
605It's sharing it.其为分享.
606Like that's actually valuable.就像这其实是有价值的。
607And then highlighting like然后强调像
608what I actually gained from that experience and why that makes me a better candidate.我从那段经历中得到了什么,为什么这让我成为一个更好的候选人。
609Yeah.
610That last sentence, you just reeled off like a bunch of very useful skills for the course.最后一句,你只是卷起 像一堆非常有用的技能 课程。
611So experiences and reflections.因此,经验和思考。
612Yeah, exactly.没错
613A good combo.一个很好的组合。
614Not just listing your qualities不只是列出你的品格
615or just listing experiences like a bit of both.或者只是列举一些经验 喜欢两者。
616Kind of bringing whatever you're talking about,那种带来你所说的,
617bringing it back to why that makes you more interested, more motivated and a better把它带回为什么 让你更感兴趣, 更有动力和更好
618candidate for the course.课程候选人。
619The next paragraph, you are talking about some reading.下一段,你说的是阅读。
620During my在我的期间
621time at the Cavendish, I felt honoured to have the opportunity to talk to scientists there.在卡文迪什,我很荣幸有机会 在那里与科学家交谈。
622I enjoyed learning a bit about quantum physics, an area in which many specialised.我很喜欢学习量子物理学 这个领域有很多专业
623This led me这让我
624to read QED, The Strange Theory of Light and Matter by Richard Feynman.阅读QED, 理查德·费曼的《光明与物质的奇怪理论》。
625I was struck by chapter two,我被第二章震动了
626which outlines how the basic behaviours of light, like reflection and refraction,它概述了光的基本行为,如反射和折射,
627can be predicted using quantum electrodynamics.可以用量子电动力学来预测.
628It renewed my appreciation of the complex mechanisms我再次对复杂的机制表示赞赏。
629behind seemingly simple interactions, challenging me to question how other phenomena can be reassessed挑战我质疑如何重新评估其他现象
630using quantum mechanics.使用量子力学.
631You know the sentence, I felt honoured to have the opportunity to talk你知道句子,我很荣幸有机会说话
632to scientists there.对那里的科学家。
633How'd you feel about brown nosing?你对褐色点头的感觉如何?
634I feel like what I was trying to say was我觉得我想说的是
635not just that I went there, I did my work and then I left, but that I really tried to make the most不只是去那儿,我做了我的工作,然后我离开了, 我真的很努力地使
636of all of the opportunities that were presented to me while I was at the Cavendish.在我到卡文迪什时给我的所有机会
637Not just不仅仅是
638do my work, but like learning more broadly about what other people were doing.做我的工作,但喜欢 更广泛地学习别人在做什么。
639It is an honour.这是一种荣誉。
640The first sentence is a nice link, isn't it, between the previous paragraph and this one?第一句是上段和这一段之间的良好联系,不是吗?
641And being able to say not just I did the experience at the Cavendish, but I took something我不仅在卡文迪什工作过 而且还拿了些东西
642from it.从它。
643I wanted to learn more afterwards.之后我想多学点
644So there is a plot really, isn't there?所以真的有阴谋 不是吗?
645Cause like因为...
646you've gone from the humble magazines to reading this book.你从谦卑的杂志上读了这本书
647How did you come to choose this book你怎么选择这本书的
648for your personal statement?你的私人笔录?
649I actually can't remember where I found- Was it like a reading其实我不记得我在哪里找到... 是像读数
650list?列表吗 ?
651I don't think I got it off a specific reading list.我不认为我得到了它 从一个特定的阅读列表。
652I'm sure I found it recommended我肯定我找到了推荐书
653somewhere.某处.
654Cause I saw it under the video and someone said they read this book as well.因为我在录影带下看到它 有人说他们也读过这本书
655Yeah.
656This book is quite a classic one that I think quite a few people read这本书很经典 我想很多人都读过
657and put on their personal statements.并写上他们的个人声明。
658I didn't necessarily know that at the time,我当时不一定知道
659but I loved it.但我喜欢它。
660It was like a super, super interesting book.这就像一本超级,超级有趣的书。
661Like before you've said就像你说的一样
662you've read the book and then I did some additional reflection about reflection in this case,你读了这本书,然后我做了一些额外的反省 对于这个案例的反思,
663literally.从字面上说
664Yes.
665Talk about a specific chapter, which I think can be a good thing to do in谈一个具体章节,我认为可以做一件好事
666personal statements when you're talking about a book, to be able to have something more concrete当你在谈论一本书时, 个人的陈述, 能够有更具体的东西
667that you can prepare to talk about again, in case they ask you.你可以再谈一次 以防他们问你
668You don't have to prepare the whole你不必准备整件事
669book.书。
670Exactly.没错
671You don't have to.你不必这样
672So that's quite a useful tactic that I found.我发现这个战术很有用
673That was这是
674the chapter that I was most interested in.我最感兴趣的那一章
675And I guess was what I could tie most to the science我猜我最能和科学联系在一起的是
676that I had learned so far.我至今为止所学到的
677Like, you know, reflection and refraction, which you learn比如,你知道,反射和折射, 你学到
678about at school, just sort of challenging my understanding of that, I guess, which like we在学校,只是有点挑战 我的理解,我猜,
679said earlier is sort of a key skill of studying university, being able to change your mind and说之前是学习大学的关键技能 能够改变你的想法
680reassess your knowledge and understanding of things.重新评估你的知识和对事物的理解。
681You've put that you have been challenged你说过你被挑战了
682to question how other phenomena can be reassessed using quantum mechanics.质疑如何利用量子力学重新评估其他现象。
683So I think even though所以我想虽然
684you don't have an answer in this personal statement, you're sharing that you have a broad在这份个人陈述中你没有答案, 你分享你有一个广泛
685mindset towards the subject, I think.我认为,这是对这个主题的心态。
686Yeah.
687A curiosity and eagerness to learn.好奇心和渴望学习
688Yeah.
689All全体
690right.
691Second to last paragraph seems to be your trophy cabinet of all your fabulous achievements第二段到最后一段 似乎是你的奖杯柜 你所有的精彩成就
692during school.在校期间。
693You don't need to read through them all.你不用全读一遍
694Oh, we do.哦,我们有。
695I find solving a difficult我觉得很难解决
696problem or understanding a demanding topic highly rewarding.问题或理解一个要求很高的话题 很有价值。
697I especially enjoy the more我特别喜欢
698thought-provoking problems centered in extracurricular challenges and have won awards this year in the以课外挑战为核心的发人深思的问题,今年在
699Mathematical Olympiad for Girls Distinction.数学奥运女子特长.
700Senior Math Challenge, Gold.高级数学挑战,黄金。
701Intermediate Gray中间灰色
702Kangaroo, Merit.袋鼠,功绩.
703Cambridge Chemistry Challenge, Gold.剑桥化学挑战, Gold.
704和B,PHO,AS物理挑战,
705Silver, Best in School.银色,学校最好的。
706My enthusiasm for science leads me to promote it to other students as editor我对科学的热情引导我把它推广给其他学生做编辑
707of the physics section of my school science magazine, as a physics mentor and tutor to作为物理导师和导师
708girls at school, and as a volunteer to the Ogden Trust Extreme Physics for year 10 students.女孩在学校, 作为志愿者 在奥格登信托极端物理 为10年级的学生。
709Again,再说一遍
710you've started the paragraph by saying you find solving difficult problems rewarding,你开始这个段落时 说你会找到解决困难问题的办法
711and then you show that you have done this extensively.然后你就证明你做了很多事情
712What stands out to you reading你读什么?
713this paragraph?这段?
714I feel like I used a lot of words, listing names of things that I probably didn't我觉得我用了很多字 列出我可能没有的名字
715need to.有必要
716You've done it concisely, I think.我认为你做的很简洁
717I did it as concisely as I could.我尽可能简洁地做了
718You've kind of put说得好
719yourself across, is what I feel.你过去,就是我的感觉。
720I read it feeling like it's your personal statement rather than我读到它的感觉 就像是你的个人陈述而不是
721a generic one.一个通用的。
722It's important to, as much as you can, try and put yourself across as a person重要的是,尽可能地,尝试 把自己作为一个人。
723over and above your interest for the subject.除了你对这个话题的兴趣之外
724I think trying to be genuine about what you're我认为,试图真实 你是什么
725interested in and what you're excited about and what you've enjoyed can only be a good thing.感兴趣,你兴奋什么,你享受什么,只能是一件好事.
726That process of finding what you enjoy can also help you understand more what you want to study寻找自己喜欢的东西的过程 也能帮助你了解更多你想学习的东西
727and where you'd want to study it to.和你想学习的地方。
728All these challenges, opportunities you found through所有这些挑战,你找到的机会
729school or were some of them ones that you found externally?还是你在外面找到的?
730From memory, they were all things从记忆看,它们都是一切
731that came through school one way or another.以某种方式通过学校。
732Some of the others were maybe things that we got an有些可能是我们发现的
733email saying, if anybody wants to do this, then let us know.如果有人想这么做 那就告诉我们
734I can't remember specifically.我记不清了
735You can put experiences you've done for one day, even if it's just like one lecture, as you've你可以把一天的经验, 即使它只是像一个讲座,你已经
736mentioned earlier, and it actually does help you look more unique than someone who's just done their之前提到,这确实 帮助你看起来更独特 比谁刚刚做了他们
737A级.
738Even though you might have found out about these things through school, I think it虽然你可能在学校里发现了这些事,但我想
739makes you look like you've gone beyond school.让你看起来像你已经离开了学校。
740I think you've put across as well your own我想你也用过你自己的
741independence and responsibility by talking about the school magazine that you are editor of and独立和负责,谈论你所编辑的学校杂志
742then being a shining light, a role model to the next generation.成为下一代的榜样
743These I didn't talk about more这些我没有多说
744because actually they were more smaller things that I did.因为它们其实是我做的更小的事
745Being the editor of my school science做我的学校科学的编辑
746magazine, I think we had one publication in the year that I edited one off.杂志上,我想我们有一 出版物在这一年,我编辑了一个关闭。
747但它是一个banger。
748It wasn't a huge thing that I had a whole bunch to say about, but it just shows, again, I'm keen.我有很多话要说,这不是一件大事, 但它再次表明,我很热心。
749I'm not just doing it in lessons.我不只是在上课时这样做。
750I'm doing it outside.我在外面做这个。
751I'm interested to learn more and stuff我想多学点东西
752like that.像这样
753For a magazine, even if you have published one edition, they don't need to know对于杂志,即使你已经出版了一个版本, 他们不需要知道
754that.那个
755You are just the editor.你只是编辑
756You see this on LinkedIn as you grow up.你长大后在LinkedIn上看到这个
757Everyone's CVs look每个人都看CV
758unbelievably impressive, but I'm sure if you dig a bit deeper into most people's experiences,令人难以置信的印象, 但我敢肯定,如果你挖 一点点深入到大多数人的经验,
759then you see it's been worth it in a way that implies more responsibility.然后,你看到它一直值得 它的方式意味着更多的责任。
760I think that's why我想这就是为什么
761the process that I went through of starting with just a list of everything that I've ever done was我所经历的过程 开始只是列表 我做过的一切
762a useful starting point because you can bring out things, whether they're subject related or not,一个有用的起点 因为你可以带来的东西, 无论它们是否与主题有关,
763that maybe wouldn't be the first thing to come to mind.也许不是第一个想到的
764Even if it wasn't physics related,即使它与物理无关,
765if I'd done some kind of essay competition in a different subject, that would still be如果我在不同的题材里做了一些论文比赛 那还是
766cool to be able to talk about that I did that, even though it wouldn't necessarily能够说出我这么做的真酷 虽然不一定
767seem obvious at first.一开始看起来很明显
768When I applied to PBS, I wasn't doing psychology, so I put like my maths当我申请PBS时,我没有做心理学, 所以我把像数学
769A level in.进入一级
770It doesn't really matter if it's different subjects.不论不同学科,都无所谓.
771You can tie it in.你可以把它绑起来。
772Or just还是只是
773talk about the skills that you gained.谈谈你学到的技能
774Yeah, exactly.没错
775I think I just talked about hard work.我想我刚刚谈到努力工作。
776All right, the final paragraph.好吧,最后一段。
777Ah yes, the extra curriculars.啊,是的,额外的课程员。
778So, my intellectual curiosity因此,我的智力好奇心
779and desire to succeed extend beyond the classroom.并渴望成功 超越课堂。
780I enjoy the performing arts,我喜欢表演艺术
781completing grade eight violin and Lambda grade seven this year, playing in my school orchestra今年完成八年级小提琴和兰巴达七年级 在我的校乐团演奏
782and taking part in two plays.并参加两场演出。
783I captain my lacrosse team and in completing my gold Duke我带领我的曲棍球队完成我的金公爵
784of Edinburgh award, I thrive when presented with multiple simultaneous challenges and will爱丁堡奖,我欣欣向荣 当面对多重同时的挑战和意志
785approach my undergraduate degree with the same motivation and commitment.以同样的动机和承诺接近我的本科学位。
786What I was going to我本来想做的
787say is what your first sentence is, which is that you've shown your intellectual curiosity说你的第一句是什么, 就是说你表现出了你的智力好奇心
788and desire extend beyond the classroom.欲望超越课堂
789Did you think about how much of the personal statement你有没有想过 多少个人声明
790to dedicate to this section?用于本节?
791The impression that I got is that if you're not applying to Oxbridge,我得到的印象是 如果你没有申请Oxbridge,
792people tend to put more into the extracurricular section, particularly universities like Durham,人们倾向于投入更多的课外部分, 尤其是大学像达勒姆,
793I think are quite big on the extracurricular side and sort of knowing that you'll be a kind of我认为在课外方面相当大 并且某种程度上知道你会是一种
794active part of the community and whatever it is that you're interested in.社区的积极分子 以及你感兴趣的一切
795But Durham actually但实际上达勒姆
796let you submit a separate personal statement for them from memory.让他们单独提交个人声明
797Since I knew that Cambridge was因为我知道剑桥是
798my first choice, I kept it a bit leaner because that was what I was trying to market myself我第一个选择,我保持它有点瘦 因为这就是我试图推销自己
799towards a little bit more.再往上一点
800I kept it a bit more concise and didn't allocate too much of the我比较简洁一点,没有分配太多
801personal statement to it.个人声明
802You've also drawn it back to studying at uni.你还把它拉回大学学习
803Cambridge are really剑桥真的
804bothered about what your extracurricular activities are, as far as I understand,担心你的课外活动 在我看来
805but you've tied it back.但你把它绑回去了
806Unless you're a rower.除非你是个划船的
807Unless you're a rower, they love rowing.除非你是划船的 他们喜欢划船
808I think我觉得
809it's also great if you play the organ.如果你弹管风琴也很棒
810That's the other thing I heard.这是我听到的另一件事。
811Oh, if you're an organ哦,如果你是一个器官
812player.游戏机。
813Every college has to have like an organ scholar in every year or every other year.每个学院每年或每隔一年都要有像器官学者一样的学者.
814In Emmanuel College, the organ scholar gets such a good room every year.在埃马纽埃尔学院,管风琴学者每年得到这样好的房间.
815It's like every room just就像每个房间一样
816for the organ scholar.对于器官学者。
817But you do then have to play the organ at every single service, choir但你必须演奏管风琴 在每一个服务,合唱团
818practice, et cetera, forever, probably.练习,等等, 永远,也许。
819But it's worth it for that free pass into Cambridge.但是,这是值得的 自由通过剑桥。
820You also have to be good at your subject and play the organ to an incredibly high standard.你还必须善于研究你的课题 以极高的标准演奏管风琴
821I think thriving with multiple simultaneous challenges is especially useful for Cambridge我认为,在多重同时挑战下蓬勃发展对剑桥特别有用
822because you are multiple simultaneously challenged.因为你同时受到多重挑战
823I'm not sure I would say anymore我不确定还会说什么
824that I thrive in that circumstance.在那种情况下,我兴旺发达。
825Thrive is already quite a strong word.Trive已经是一个很强的词。
826Maybe school me也许可以教我
827was just superhuman or something.只是超人之类的
828Me with one challenge now.我有一个挑战
829What was it about year 13?13年级的事是怎么回事?
830You你们
831could just take on the world and then at uni it's like getting up at 8.50am is like human rights可能只是占据世界 然后在uni 它就像起床 在8点50分是人权
832level atrocity.暴行
833I think doing any kind of particular sciencey subject at university,我想在大学里做任何特定的科学研究
834you will have quite a lot of contact hours.你会有很多接触时间。
835You'll have your labs, you'll have your lectures,你会有你的实验室, 你会有你的讲座,
836you'll have like work that you need to do outside both of those.你会有喜欢的工作 你需要做这两个之外。
837And also you'll probably be wanting你也可能会想要
838to try and have a life outside of your course as well.尝试过一个超出你课程的生活
839Yeah, being able to show that you have是啊,可以显示你有
840the capacity to not just do that, but like make the most of it and enjoy it is good.不仅能够做到这一点,而且能够像充分利用和享受那样,这是好事。
841Well, that rounds off a stellar personal statement.嗯,那弹出 一个星形的个人声明。
842Reading it now,现在看
843would you change anything looking back drastically?你会改变什么 回首重大?
844No, I think I'm pretty happy with it on the whole, you know, given what I knew and my不,我觉得我很高兴 它在总体上,你知道, 考虑到我知道和我的
845understanding of physics and what university was like and all of that at the time.了解物理 大学是什么样子 以及当时的一切
846I'mи琌
847like pretty proud of it.就像很骄傲一样
848For the level of development your发展水平:
849prefrontal cortex was at, I think you've done a fantastic job.前额皮层在, 我认为你做了一个伟大的工作。
850So I will admit to you to my所以我会向你承认我的
851imaginary Cambridge college.想象中的剑桥大学.
852Who did you get to check over your personal statement?你让谁检查了你的个人陈述?
853I think just我觉得只是
854sort of anyone I could think of who might be anyone on the street to help out with it.可能是街上的人来帮忙
855I一、导 言
856wouldn't remember the exact list.不记得确切的名单了
857Definitely did a lot with my mum like going through it and then肯定对我妈妈做了很多事 喜欢经历它,然后
858physics teachers at school, but I probably did get some friends to look at it as well.学校的物理老师, 但我可能确实让一些朋友也看看。
859The more feedback that you can get, the better because people do say different things.得到的反馈越多越好 因为人们会说不同的话
860And some还有一些
861people, the feedback that they give just isn't useful.人们,他们提供的反馈只是没有用。
862There's definitely feedback that I got我肯定有反馈
863that I didn't include at all.我完全没有包括。
864If three people say the same thing that you should change, then,如果有三个人说你应该改变的
865you know, you should probably change that.你知道,你也许应该改变这一点。
866A crowdsourced personal statement.多方联动的个人声明.
867Crowdsourced, yeah.人群来源,是的。
868Do you have any general advice for您是否有关于
869personal statements?个人陈述?
870Whichever uni that you're applying to that's like your first choice or无论你申请哪个单项 都像你的首选
871first few choices, trying to get a sense of what they want to know about you, what they're looking最初的几个选择, 试图得到一个感知 他们想知道的关于你, 他们正在寻找
872for in a statement, because it is different between different universities.因为不同大学之间不同
873So if you know如果你知道的话
874someone that's applied there before or gone there or can talk to a student now, or even just like在那里被应用过的人 或去过那里的人 或现在可以跟学生说话的人
875emailing someone random, I don't know, you might hear back trying to get a sense of what they want随便给别人发邮件,我不知道, 你可能会听到回声 试图了解他们想要什么
876and then putting across all of the things that are good about you, that you like, that you're excited然后将你所喜欢的,你所兴奋的 美好事物 都放在一起
877about, that you want to do at university in the best way that you can.关于,你想在大学里尽你所能做。
878Agreed.同意,我同意你的话。
879Thank you very much非常感谢
880for your time, Poppy.为了你的时间,Poppy。
881We'll be getting back to you in a few weeks with the outcome of your application.我们几周后再联系你 你的申请结果
882I look forward to hearing from you.我期待着听到你的消息。
883And do you have any questions for me, Poppy?你有问题要问我吗, Poppy?
884No.没有
885It's a great astronomical phenomena.这是一个伟大的天文现象。
886Did I say that right?我说的对吗?
887Yeah, really big words.是啊,非常大的词。
888Are you saying that like-你是说...
889I don't know what I was saying in the video.我不知道我在视频里说什么
890Who are you?你是谁?
891The question I ask myself every day.我每天都在问自己这个问题
892So did you put much thought into your所以,你把很多考虑 在你的
893No, that sounds a bit offensive.不,这听起来有点冒犯。
894Sorry.对不起
895Hello there.哈啰
896Would you like to introduce yourself?你想自我介绍一下吗?
897Astronomical.天文报.
898I said it right, didn't I?我说对了,不是吗?
899Yeah, you said it right both times.是啊,你说对了两次。
900I feel like I say astronomical.我觉得我说天文。
901No, you're not.不,你没有。
902Hey, what's your name?嘿,你叫什么名字来着?
903Why did we say hi at the same time?为什么我们同时打招呼?
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